"One Clear Day" - Working out a concept

[fdesalvo]

I decided to dust this one off, remix, and master it in the hopes a bridge, solo, and outro would follow.  Here she is in it's basest form - I might have shared this already.  My current mindset has this sucker going a bit Steely Dan in the not-too-distant future. 

I wrote it a year or so back..in the midst of great tribulation and stress.  I literally begged to have one clear day.  I can't identify the style or genre.  It's unique amongst the things I've written.  Maybe it's finished as is?

https://soundcloud.com/frankdesalvo/one-clear-day

Take a free copy if you like.  Cheers - and happy Friday, gang!

https://frankdesalvo.bandcamp.com/track/one-clear-day

 

[wolbai]

Frank,

this is a pretty good material for a pop/punk song: when I hear it, I think of it as a vocal song, a female voice, young, with lots of energy ... Probably not very helpful for you  :icon_biggrin:  Anyway: Keep on to develop - wolbai  :icon_thumright:

 

[fdesalvo]

Thanks, man.  You might be shocked to know that when I sing, I do so with a youthful and energetic feminine voice.  It's the strangest thing, really.  :laughing7:

Cheers, my brotha!

 

[Timmsie95]

Awesome!
:rock-on:

 

[fdesalvo]

Thank you sir!

 

[Logrinn]

Frank, this is excellent, as always!  :icon_thumright:
The syncopated guitar chords - as well as the sound - makes me think of The Police. I dig it! :guitaristgif:

 

[fdesalvo]

Love love me some Police!  Thank you!

 

[DocNrock]

This is great, Frank!  I agree with Logrinn about the syncopation.  :rock-on:

 

[fdesalvo]

Thank you, Doc! 

I keep eyeballin your blue velocity.  Tasty!